Janie contemplates the Pacific Ocean during her time in the Haight. From the look on her face, she is concerned about Jeremy. She would be playing “Somebody to Love” or “Brown-eyed Girl” on her inner jukebox in 1967.
“Sweet Jane” – my first draft is complete at approximately 87,000 words. Now the real work begins. I will read it through for continuity. I’ve made notes from the critique sessions I attend each Saturday. Chapter Two requires an extensive rewrite, but my path is now clear.
While I edit the entire manuscript, I will work on the query letter and synopsis.